Sunday, October 16, 2011

Restless in unending Purgatory (poem by Raahila Ladhani)

This Day I Sit and Stare into the naked air.
Waiting for my love to Begin Anew.
My heart to heal and peace to settle in my Weary soul.
My Restless Heart Walks, to wait for sleep to come.
To dream of a Better tomorrow.
But None come to me ,my love.
A restless heart beats, to the Drum of evil time that slips away from my Palm ,taking with its Grains of sand, my love, my peace , my patience.
Left is Forlorn ,Forsaken,Impatient me.
Restless in Unending PURGATORY
Unable to live.
Unable to Die .
Not to be me and FOR U NOT TO BE MINE.....

17 comments:

  1. Heyy Raahila!

    Powerful and potent stuff! Awesome

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  2. Thanku andre glad u liked it...more to come

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  3. Thank u deepak very kind of u to say so

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  4. well, letting the heart for a walk till the sleep comes..seems like few nostalgic moments trying to knock-down the wall of other side for better and heal the self 'n the rest... i liked for sure, but dil maange more :)

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  5. Reading your words evokes past feelings felt, and is that not what poetry is about! Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

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  6. really u r great ....

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  7. Realy touching and meaning full if you read it again & again, With out your permission I am takeing the copy of your inner expressions. Thanks
    VERMA

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  8. remindingg :

    Yeh Jeevan Hai, Is Jeevan Ka
    Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Rungroop
    Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Khushiyan
    Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Chaon Dhoop
    Yeh Jeevan Hai...
    Yeh Na Socho Isme Apni Haar Hai Ke Jeet Hai
    Ise Apna Lo Jo Bhi Jeevan Ki Reet Hai
    Yeh Zid Chodo, Bandhan Yuh Na Todo
    Har Pal Ek Darpan Hai
    Yeh Jeevan Hai...

    Dhan Se Na Duniya Se, Ghar Se Na Dwar Se
    Saason Ki Dor Bandhi Hai, Preetam Ke Pyar Se
    Duniya Choote, Par Na Toote, Yeh Aisa Bandhan Hai
    Yeh Jeevan Hai...

    Yeh Jeevan Hai, Is Jeevan Ka
    Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Rungroop
    Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Khushiyan
    Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Chaon Dhoop
    Yeh Jeevan Hai...


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NNHbax_kcq4&feature=fvwrel

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  9. Thanks sashwat will definitely put some more up soon....

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  10. Thanks Paula glad u liked it will put some more up and would love more comments and hope some criticism as well thanks

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  11. Thanks SSV Verma dont mind it being copied as long as it is credited properly...do come back for more :)

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  12. Thank u Pramodji would love some more of your original though

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  13. Raahi.. Gud attempt indeed!! Love d feelings in it.. Go Ahead wid ur creations... Awaiting!!:-)

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  14. hi rahila simply wow n amazing i love your poem nbest wishes for more

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  15. Thank u Subhashji i've posted one more already. there are 6 other posts do check. would love some more comments thanks

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