This Day I Sit and Stare into the naked air.
Waiting for my love to Begin Anew.
My heart to heal and peace to settle in my Weary soul.
My Restless Heart Walks, to wait for sleep to come.
To dream of a Better tomorrow.
But None come to me ,my love.
A restless heart beats, to the Drum of evil time that slips away from my Palm ,taking with its Grains of sand, my love, my peace , my patience.
Left is Forlorn ,Forsaken,Impatient me.
Restless in Unending PURGATORY
Unable to live.
Unable to Die .
Not to be me and FOR U NOT TO BE MINE.....
Waiting for my love to Begin Anew.
My heart to heal and peace to settle in my Weary soul.
My Restless Heart Walks, to wait for sleep to come.
To dream of a Better tomorrow.
But None come to me ,my love.
A restless heart beats, to the Drum of evil time that slips away from my Palm ,taking with its Grains of sand, my love, my peace , my patience.
Left is Forlorn ,Forsaken,Impatient me.
Restless in Unending PURGATORY
Unable to live.
Unable to Die .
Not to be me and FOR U NOT TO BE MINE.....
Heyy Raahila!
ReplyDeletePowerful and potent stuff! Awesome
I am impressed
ReplyDeleteThanku andre glad u liked it...more to come
ReplyDeleteThank u deepak very kind of u to say so
ReplyDeletewell, letting the heart for a walk till the sleep comes..seems like few nostalgic moments trying to knock-down the wall of other side for better and heal the self 'n the rest... i liked for sure, but dil maange more :)
ReplyDeleteReading your words evokes past feelings felt, and is that not what poetry is about! Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletereally u r great ....
ReplyDeleteRealy touching and meaning full if you read it again & again, With out your permission I am takeing the copy of your inner expressions. Thanks
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remindingg :
ReplyDeleteYeh Jeevan Hai, Is Jeevan Ka
Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Rungroop
Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Khushiyan
Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Chaon Dhoop
Yeh Jeevan Hai...
Yeh Na Socho Isme Apni Haar Hai Ke Jeet Hai
Ise Apna Lo Jo Bhi Jeevan Ki Reet Hai
Yeh Zid Chodo, Bandhan Yuh Na Todo
Har Pal Ek Darpan Hai
Yeh Jeevan Hai...
Dhan Se Na Duniya Se, Ghar Se Na Dwar Se
Saason Ki Dor Bandhi Hai, Preetam Ke Pyar Se
Duniya Choote, Par Na Toote, Yeh Aisa Bandhan Hai
Yeh Jeevan Hai...
Yeh Jeevan Hai, Is Jeevan Ka
Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Rungroop
Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Khushiyan
Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai - Yahi Hai Chaon Dhoop
Yeh Jeevan Hai...
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Thanks sashwat will definitely put some more up soon....
ReplyDeleteThanks Paula glad u liked it will put some more up and would love more comments and hope some criticism as well thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks SSV Verma dont mind it being copied as long as it is credited properly...do come back for more :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Pramodji would love some more of your original though
ReplyDeleteRaahi.. Gud attempt indeed!! Love d feelings in it.. Go Ahead wid ur creations... Awaiting!!:-)
ReplyDeletehi rahila simply wow n amazing i love your poem nbest wishes for more
ReplyDeleteThank u Subhashji i've posted one more already. there are 6 other posts do check. would love some more comments thanks
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